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Post by Mama Hotcakes on Nov 14, 2017 17:13:20 GMT
OOCName: Mama Hotcakes, Mama, Hotcakes. Years RPing: At least 7 How You Found Us: Carried Home
Palestar Female 47 Moons Bisexual Creekclan Leader | Appearance
PaleStar is a lithe and quite petite she-cat for her age, but with that she packs a bite. She's a tabby with the Moscow Mutation, making her look quite odd and unusual. Her eyes are a light hazel, and her tail is tipped with black. Personality
Palestar is a calm and intelligent she-cat, who would use her words instead of fighting for her kills. She's not one to be offended easily, and usually has good retorts to insults. Despite her size she can be a feisty girl, and sometimes a bit of a flirt.. but it's very rare to see through her serious shell. She's very against killing for the sport of it, and often scolds younger warriors or apprentices if they waste prey. Along with that, the murder of a clanmate is seen as a severe crime in her eyes, and often ends in an overly harsh punishment. History
Palestar was born to Creekclan, her parents named PetalDrop and TigerSting. Her mother was a dainty she-cat, one of high charm, and her father was a great warrior. She has three other siblings at the time. The largest sibling was a rather striking tom named Frostkit, and her other brother was Splashkit. She had one sister, who died from Greencough at an early age, and because of that Palestar doesn't recall her very much. As an apprentice she grew closer to Frostkit, now Frostpaw, as Splashpaw strayed farther and farther away from their relationship. She always remembered him as a very flirty cat, and the thought made her queasy. Of course, Frostpaw was also a bit of a flirt, but he wasn't nearly as bad.
When she became a warrior, named Palesting after her agility, the she-cat grew a bit closer to her flirty brother, trying to let him at least try to redeem himself. Frostsnap was always the logical one and told her not to, but she still did it anyways. Splashfoot had grown to be a bit less of a rude cat, and their bond grew once again.
When the deputy at the time passed away, she was promoted to deputy, and then leader.
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Post by Cactusdog on Nov 15, 2017 1:04:05 GMT
Unfortunately your name can't be Creekstar because the first leader of the clan was Creekstar BUT if you change the prefix.
Also History must be at least 200 words and personality at least 100. If you have any questions I'll try to be quick to respond :3
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Post by Mama Hotcakes on Nov 15, 2017 2:32:20 GMT
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Post by Cactusdog on Nov 15, 2017 2:35:47 GMT
Mama Hotcakes Personality and History still need to be lengthened Personality at least 100 and history 200 but after that you should be good to go!
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Post by Mama Hotcakes on Nov 15, 2017 2:42:35 GMT
CactusdogI just double checked, the personality is at 103 words, and the history is 207 
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Post by Cactusdog on Nov 15, 2017 2:46:58 GMT
oh okay cool! I'll move your thread to approved character bios and approve you for rp. Trackers CLICK HERE our characters bio here because when I move it you will no longer be able to edit it it so on your tracker you can keep an up to date bio  thanks so much for joining! |
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thanks so much for joining!
